Writing Effective Email Subject Lines | Business English B1
Your subject line is why your email gets opened — or ignored.
Make it specific
- Weak: “Update” → Strong: “Q3 Sales Report — Ready for Review by Friday”
- Weak: “Question” → Strong: “Clarification needed: Budget approval deadline”
Keep it under 50 characters
Many mobile screens cut off anything longer. Count before you send.
Use action words when you need a response
- “Action required: sign off by [date]”
- “Decision needed: project timeline”
- “Please review: draft attached”
Avoid
- ALL CAPS — reads as shouting
- Vague words: “update”, “info”, “hi”
- Starting with “RE:” when it is not a reply
Practice
Rewrite these subject lines to make them specific and action-oriented:
1. “About the meeting”
2. “Question about the budget”
3. “FYI”
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