Writing to Authorities: Formal English for Official Letters
Writing to Authorities: Formal English for Official Letters
In Australia and then in France, I wrote dozens of letters to immigration, housing, tax authorities. Every time, the language had to be right — not just grammatically, but in tone. Too casual: dismissed. Too aggressive: ignored. The sweet spot is formal, clear, and factual. I learned to write like the letter was being read by a tired civil servant at 4 p.m. on a Friday — because it probably was.
- Structure a formal letter correctly
- Use formal language and register appropriately
- State a request and close a letter professionally
Opening: Dear Sir/Madam, / Dear [Name],
First sentence: I am writing with regard to… / I am writing to request…
Body: One paragraph per point. Be concise. Use passive where appropriate: My application was submitted on…
Request: I would be grateful if you could… / I respectfully request that…
Close: Yours faithfully, (Dear Sir/Madam) or Yours sincerely, (named person)
🧠 Grammar: passive voice in formal writing
Formal writing often uses passive to sound impersonal and professional:
Active: I sent the documents on 3 June.
Passive: The documents were submitted on 3 June.
Passive is NOT always better — use it when the actor is less important than the action.
Write the opening paragraph of a letter to a housing authority requesting information about a rental deposit.
Start with: I am writing with regard to…
Use authentic letters (with names removed). Comparing a poor example with a good one makes the target structure vivid. Spotting problems in someone else’s writing is lower stakes than producing it — start there.
English language content. Not a substitute for qualified instruction.
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